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I have to give kudos for portraying a character that is definitely like some women I've seen in real life.
Ddsgale....bookrix.com
This is what I like to read. You went into enough detail to make it sensual without making it sound "bow-chicka-bow-wow". It was a nice surprise at the end and it ended happily. An all around good job.
Yezall....bookrix.com
GETTING THE FIX (Excerpt)
Rick Barry
Published by Rick Barry at Smashwords
Copyright 2008-2011 Rick Barry
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Part of the
Every Woman’s Fantasy Series
A COLLECTION OF INTER-CONNECTED
LIFE STORIES
With A Touch of Erotica
CHRONICLE I
Begin
.....gliding his hands up the sides of her body to raise both her arms up high. He stops kissing and looks up at May. She looks at him. Max looks up at the ceiling fan hanging above them. May looks up at it and knows what he wants. But even with both arms stretched up, her finger tips are well below the blades, she can’t reach it.
Max, keeping his hands around May's arms to keep them up, bends down and starts sucking her breasts again, which is very nice. It all feels good, he feels good and she loves her nipples sucked. Unable to take her mind off his mouth, May doesn’t notice Max unbuttons her jeans and has slid them and her panties down past her thighs until she feels a small breeze. Bringing his arms under her ass again, Max softly lifts May right out of her panties and slowly slides her body up his’ as he plants small kisses down her stomach. As his mouth is about to reach her center, May feels the fan blades touch her fingers, she quickly grips two of them.
‘I hope he doesn't think these blades can hold me? He better not let me go!’ But the thought of her hitting the floor drifts from her mind just as quickly as it came when Max sucks the top of her thigh into his mouth. ‘Oh the magic that is his mouth.’ May locks her hands around the ceiling fan as he holds her tight against his muscular chest. His fingers press into her ass, then down through the back of her thighs. Max pulls on her left leg and lifts it up onto his shoulder. Planting soft kisses and mean sucks to her inner thigh, Max seems to enjoy tasting her. May looks down.....
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....each wave only sends her into a free fall toward the next. On her way down, warm water rushes upward between her legs with force and crashes into her pussy passionately. Off in the distance, she can see the biggest wave yet, coming closer. She’s heading right into it. Wave after wave and over and over, each one more intense than the last. Her eyes squeezed shut, her body quaking to just burst. She knows she can’t take another touch, without exploding. She opens her eyes to see that she has reached the top of the biggest wave of all.
She’s in the BIG CALM now! For these few seconds all her senses are dulled. This is the sign that it’s the big one. Over the side she goes. Sliding fast down the backside of the big wave, on the verge of a massive orgasm, she can no longer hold back. So she lets go, her mouth whispering, because that’s all it can do, only one word as she surrenders, YEEEESSSSS and she feels her body explode massively between her legs. May’s hips shaking and jerking up and down. It's so intense, she balls up her fists, tries to hold her insides tight and ride it down.
"Damn, Max," sounding like a cry, "I'm cumming! I'm cumming, right now! And I really like it, shit!"
May looks down at Max's head going up and down, continuing to please her through her orgasm. ‘Lick that pussy, yes! Don’t stop, please don’t stop! It feels soooo good, mmmm!’ She thinks while she attempts to keep her eyes open. After-shock tingle waves are rapidly sent wildly up and down her whole body. During its peak, her shaking became almost violent.
Just as the big one begins to subside, out from nowhere, all the sensitivity rushes back on her. May didn't realize, but she has begun kicking her heels against Max's back. Max still trying to continue to hold May up pulls his face out of her pussy slowly and lifts his head. May's body still twitching like he never stopped shines him a tiny guilty smile. Motioning her legs off his shoulders, May brings them down and around in front again. Max slowly lowers her down as she lets go of the fan and her face meets his.
"I really liked that!" She shares.
Letting her go all the way down, her legs straddle his knee, where her ass comes to rest.
"Mmmm, you did?" Max jokes.
He kisses her as he lifts her to help her stand on the chair. Taking his leg down, he unbuttons and unzips his pants. Slowly sliding them down, his dick head emerges from between his zipper split and finally his whole dick comes into view. May likes what she sees.
He is clean, thick and most importantly, hard! Just as she had imagined, his long strong waist muscles did lead down to his pleasure stick. His hair is short and trimmed. His thighs remind her of a chiseled sculptor. Like an artist’s painting, his dick sat in the center of this canvas of beauty and drew her attention. His head is slightly large, in his excitement, but smooth and inviting, never the less. A power vein runs down from the head to the base where.....
For More; Look for Where’s My Letter where you purchased Getting The Fix. Thanks for your interest, reviews and support.
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About the Author
Rick Barry is a self-taught writer. Living in the southern United States, he has been writing for just under five years.
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