Adonis in Adidas
by
Kate Dempsey
SMASHWORDS EDITION
Copyright Kate Dempsey 2011
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Seán was gorgeous, an Adonis in Adidas with a huge grin that would make anyone smile. I had been in shock ever since he asked me out, gazing into space in class muttering “Moira and Seán, Seán and Moira.” We had only known each other a few months before we set off Greek Island hopping together. I was madly in love with him and so was he. Apart from that, we didn’t have much in common. He was training to be a surveyor and I was struggling through catering college but my mother loved him. He had a way with mothers.
We were on a tight budget but the pre-Euro living was cheap and the island of Paros had the best pizzas in the Aegean. The tomatoes were so fresh, we could see them growing in great gangly clusters behind the restaurant. The local wine was drinkable too. (You know the type. It tastes like a urine sample when you get it home, but under a foreign sun, it slides down like nectar.)
The beach was to one side of the small town. Beyond the windmill with its washing line sails, it petered out to shingle. A straggled line of trees provided shade. As the sun plopped into Homer’s wine dark sea, groups of people sauntered up to the edge and staked claims on the soft sand with rolled up sleeping bags. The breeze was keeping most of the mosquitoes away but I slapped some stinky repellent on my exposed skin, just in case.
“Do you want some?” I asked Seán, waggling the bottle under his nose.
He flared his perfect nostrils. “You know they don’t bite me, Moira.” He checked his smile was as white as ever in my handbag mirror and sat watching some French girls in lethal cutoff shorts who were bruising their perfect knees trying to break sticks for firewood.
“We’ll stay here tonight,” he decided.
“I’m not so sure that’s a good idea,” I started.
Now, I was not known at the time for my spontaneity nor my easy agreement to experimentation. I was always the one carrying aspirins and plasters. If factor 100 suncream existed, I would have had that too. My shoulder bag weighed more than a small Labrador. This had been driving Seán crazy.
“Come on. Sleeping under the stars? Wait until I tell the others. They’ll be so green.” When I hesitated, he crinkled his beautiful forehead. “Don’t be an old fogey, Moira. Try something new.”
The fire smouldered to a start and soon resin scented smoke drew the various huddles into one group. We sat cross-legged, passing bottles and swapping stories of cheap ferries, cheaper rooms and nudist beaches with the multi-lingual, multi-cultural campers. Soon the restrained splashes of the waves were drowned out by bad but enthusiastic singing. One girl thought she was Kylie. Seán knew he was Bob Dylan and he had the whine to prove it.
Hoarse from singing and dizzy from drink, we crawled into our sandy bags as the stars were fading and the black sky was thinking about turning blue again. Maybe this outdoor sleeping was romantic after all, I thought, rolling closer to Seán’s sleeping bag.
I was woken by a shiny boot. As I swam up to consciousness, I could hear scuffles and shouted whispers around - “Schnell,” “Allez.” Half the night time group melted into the trees, some so quickly they left their sleeping bags behind, still caterpillared in sleeping forms.
I squinted up at the sky. “Kalimera?” I said, squandering a quarter of my Greek vocabulary in one go. There were three uniforms. They took everyone’s passports and told us to report to the station at noon.
We consulted our raggedy guide book over coffee, but it didn’t cover our situation. Wheelchair access? Page 42. Jellyfish stings? Pee on them. (Failing that, maybe the local wine?) Unlicensed taxis? Yes. Passport confiscation? Nothing.
“This is all your fault.” I hissed.
“That’s typical. Haven’t you got anything useful to say?” he hissed back.
By noon, we had worked ourselves into a tizzy. Seán said they would escort us to the border and send us into exile. I thought they were looking for bribes. Maybe they would call our parents. This didn’t bear thinking about. We ordered a round of Tuborg. Stories from other travellers mentioned fines of hundreds of thousands of drachmas – a thousand pounds or more. Neither of us had that kind of money. We drained our glasses and shuffled up the hill to the police station.
The queue of sheepish travellers stretched around the corner, past the sweet smelling bakers and down the sunny side of the square. Forget that. We skipped back to the café and ordered a goats’ cheese pizza from Zorba, our new friend. After a while, I went back to scout out the queue, but there was little movement, just a line of silent, sunburnt people. We splashed out on some rice pudding and Zorba, his mother and his extraordinarily handsome son joined us from the kitchen for a fortifying glass of ouzo, then we stretched and wove our way back to the square. The queue was gone. All that was left was a battered moped leaning against the whitewashed wall.
I tapped on the door but before we could run away, a voice yelled out something in Greek that could only have meant, “Come in.” We trooped inside, heads hanging.
The man in the shiny boots sat behind a battered Formica desk. He slapped our passports on the desk and studied each photo intently, checking our faces, one slightly pink, the other crimson. We both spoke at once.
“We only came in on a ferry last night, too late to find a room.”
“We’re very sorry, really we are.”
He sat back in his plastic chair. A labouring fan moved the hot air around.
“You,” he said. “You are from Ingerlaand?”
“Yes,” I replied, smiling in a hot, sweaty English Rose sort of a way. “Have you ever been there?”
“My mather have.”
Seán was studying the toes of his greying trainers with great interest. I was on my own.
“How did your mother like it?” I tried.
“Werry nice. Werry cold. Here is better.”
“My mother was in Greece last summer,” I said after a pause. “She loved it.” Conversations about mothers seemed like a good approach. “She said the people were very friendly and very kind,” I added for good measure.
“Oh yes,” he said, shaking his head the way the Greeks do when they agree with you. “Werry kind.”
He slicked his black hair behind his ears and studied me. I leaned forward and made admiring remarks about Paros, his office, his command of English, the local goats’ cheese pizzas and Greece in general. I was running out of things to praise and close to mentioning the wine when he started telling us about himself. Well, to be honest, he told me. He barely glanced at Seán after that.
He said how hard it was being a policeman, especially in the summer. How he had a motorbike for patrolling the island and had been run off the road by a busload of tourists. His leg was still giving him trouble. I nodded and sympathised in what seemed like the right places. He could represent Greece in a contest for talking about himself. But I was up to it, having already endured two weeks of Seán, the English candidate.
At last, he stood up, straightened his leg with a wince and slammed his fist on the desk. We jumped.
“You know how much is the fine for sleeping on the beach?” he demanded.
“No?”
“One hundred drachma.” He rolled the H with a dramatic flourish. This was about 70p, some thousand times less than we had expected.
“One hundred drachma?” I repeated. Maybe he had left out a zero. Seán swallowed, struggling not to laugh. That would have gone down like a wodge of Zorba’s extra thick pizza. “Gosh.”
“Yes. It is serious crime. Sleeping on the beach is not good. Not safe. We have many good rooms in Paros. Where you stay tonight?”
I mentioned a local taverna.
“Good.” He paused and broke into a wide grin. “OK. I let you go. You werry nice Ingerlish girl. Hab a nice day!” He gave us back our passports, shook our hands warmly and wouldn’t take our money.
“What was that about your mother?” asked Seán, back in Zorba’s. “You know she hasn’t been further than Southend.”
“It worked, didn’t it? And thanks for all your help.”
“You were doing fine on your own. You didn’t need me.”
Seán was right. I didn’t need him so I decided I would try something new. I gave him my mirror and put him on the next ferry with the French girls and no regrets but I stayed on the island for the rest of the summer, working in Zorba’s restaurant. I went back the next summer too, on my own. My mother was so disappointed in me. We would have had such beautiful children but Seán moved away to Halifax. I heard he grew stout and balding and lost his boyish features. But for that one summer, he was my Adonis in Adidas.
THE END
Kate Dempsey is a writer and poet living in Ireland. Her poetry and fiction is widely published in Ireland, the UK and Europe in magazines and anthologies as well as RTE radio and in the Poolbeg/RTE anthology 'Do The Write Thing.' She has won and been nominated for prizes which include the Hennessy New Irish Writing for Poetry and Short Fiction, Frances MacManus Short Story Award, The Plough Prize and the Cecil Day Lewis Award. reads with the Poetry Divas Collective who love to blur the wobbly boundaries between page and stage and are available to perform at all cool events.
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Chapter 1 of The Story of Plan B
The woman beside me on the bus home was reading a magazine with a photo of Larry Harte on the cover. He was gazing sensually at a pot of yellow tulips. I leaned towards her casually, trying to read the blurb. She edged away. The headline said something about a woman scorned. I was intrigued. I leaned in further and tried to angle my head so I could read it. My neck was starting to ache. The woman turned and glared at me, pursing her lips so tight her pink lipstick was pushed up a wrinkle towards her nose. I rubbed my neck and moved it slowly from side to side, pretending I had been stretching the muscles, pretending and failing. She jammed the magazine in her bag and took out her mobile phone.
He was everywhere I looked, “Flash Larry Harte,” the gorgeous gardener. He was on TV with his own programme, “Flash Gardening,” of course. He popped up on chat shows and on the odd, ill-advised celebrity game show. That phase seemed to have passed, thank goodness. Perhaps he had a new publicist. Now I saw his bronzed face in shop windows, on an advert for environmentally friendly tea, and I’d heard him guest presenting the gardening program on the radio. It was a first for me, tuning in to a radio show on gardening. I wasn’t the only one. Their ratings had been seven times the average listenership that week. I wiped a circle on the steamed up window and went back to staring out at the murky Dublin evening.
My apartment was midway between two bus stops but I got off early and walked the rest for a bit of exercise. The sky, which had been grey all day, was turning blue and the Dublin air smelled fresh. Daffodils were starting to bloom in sheltered spots and everything felt full of potential. My flatmate, Sarah was in the bath when I got home. I felt a tidy phase coming over me so I washed the kitchen floor before the feeling wore off. The kitchen was small but all the same, I bet Flash Larry Harte doesn’t get the mop and bucket out when he gets home and wash his kitchen floor. I scrubbed at a stubborn but unidentifiable sticky patch by the fridge. I bet Flash Larry Harte doesn’t have to stop at Tesco to buy peanut butter, milk and biodegradable bin bags on his way home from whatever garden he’s been digging that day.
The phone rang as I was putting away the mop. I tiptoed across the clean, damp floor, leaving a trail of grey steps across what had briefly been a pristine, shiny floor. Clean for a grand total of twenty-three seconds. Almost a record.
“Hello?” I said.
“Hello Zoë. How are you keeping?”
It was Mrs Boland, Sarah’s mother. They spoke at least twice a day, always had. And about nothing much, as far as I could gather, although with Sarah’s pending nuptials, they had more than usual to discuss the last year. She was a nice lady, so different to my own mother. I wouldn’t know what to talk to my mother about twice a day. Mrs Boland wore sensible pleated skirts and lace-up shoes, like a nun in civvies. My mother wore hand-woven, loose-draped creations and environmentally-friendly, woven espadrilles. I told her Sarah was in the bath and we chatted about the seating plan for the wedding. She had taken me under her wing when I first arrived in Dublin. She taught me which Irish tea to buy, where to find a good doctor, how to get candle wax out of carpets, that sort of thing. My mother would say something like “Leave it where it is, darling. It’s a sign. What does the shape say to you, Zoë?” And then tell me there was a positive time coming and I would be part of it. Some generality like that. Big into omens, was Georgia. Mrs Boland hung up and I was plumping the cushions when the phone rang again.
“Hello?” I said.
It must have been the evening for motherly calls. This was my mother, Georgia. She lives in an elaborate ranch house on the outskirts of Santa Fé in the Land of Enchantment, as she always calls New Mexico State. We talk more often now than we used to, maybe once a week. But still, sometimes America felt a long way away and I missed her.
“Zoë, Darling,” she gushed down the phone. “I met the most wonderful Shaman last week. He laid his hands on me. It was like a burning warmth surging through me.”
“Hello Mum. Have you been on the cheap tequila again?”
I had learned a long time ago that when my mother was in mid-gush, I could say almost anything in reply. The last time we had spoken, she had spent the whole, expensive phone call, describing some new, holistic water feature in her desert garden. She had hung up without asking how I was. I hadn’t volunteered.
“He just laid his hands on me and I am rejuvenated, totally alive. So I had to do your cards.”
“Oh Mum. Surely I’m not due the cards yet?” Some mothers think that a regular appointment with the dentist is a necessity, some mothers expect their offspring to go to mass/church/temple every week. Some mothers make regular hair appointments for their daughters. Mine makes sure I have a regular card reading. It used to be tarot cards but lately she’s taken up some wacky Native American spirituality. Call me cynical but I couldn’t see much of a difference.
“I know I only did them recently but I had a hunch that something was shifting.”
“A disturbance in the force, is it?”
“I laid out your cards, a simple spread and it’s a good thing I did. Here goes.”
“Mum, I really don’t have time for this. I’m going out in two minutes.” I looked at my watch. I had nearly half an hour before ‘Flash Gardening with Larry’ started on TV but Mum and punctuality didn’t co-exist in the same universe. And I couldn’t tell her I was planning to watch a gardening programme. She’d either laugh at me or not believe me. I didn’t know which was worse.
“Two minutes is all you can spare your mother so far away?” She sniffed slightly. “We’d barely scratch the surface.”
I sighed. “Five minutes then.” I studied the kitchen floor. There was a blob of something brown under the oven.
“Your present is looking very mixed, sticky,” Mum started.
It was certainly sticky from where I was standing. Had I dropped some Hoi Sin sauce from yesterday’s spare ribs?
“The cards are showing signs of major shake-ups on both the career and personal fronts,” she continued. “Were you thinking of moving?”
“No.”
“Ah. What about this one? The job? I see major changes in direction, in creativity and prosperity.”
“Nothing doing there. My contract has months to run and there’s no chance of a raise in the current climate.”
“Maybe so, but keep your mind open, Zoë. I only see changes for the better, though they may not seem so at the time. You were never very good at handling change.”
“I guess not but who is?” I could hear her moving the cards around.
“Yes, drastic changes on the career side.” She said this every time. She didn’t like me nine-to-fiving. “The cards know, Zoë.”
“OK Mum. I’ll bear it in mind. Anything else? What’s the word on the tall, dark handsome stranger?” Mum had often been quite accurate in this quarter. She had predicted my split with my ex, Sam, unless that was just motherly intuition as well, disguised as card reading. Although the actual, devastating details were not predicted and came as a shock to us both. “Is there the wheel of fortune? I always have the wheel of fortune.”
“It’s called ‘The Ring of Tiwa.’ But you don’t have it this time. But I see a new, serious side in the love quarter.” This sounded hopeful. “No, wait. Two love possibilities I see there. Disruption, jealousy, intense light,” she continued. “And water. Lots of it.”
“That’s the rain, Mum. It’s always raining here this time of year. It’s Ireland.”
“Listen Zoë. It’s crossing water and…oh this doesn’t look good at all. There’s going to be an accident of some kind.” That didn’t sound good. “A collision. Be careful, Zoë.”
“I always am.” I had been brought up to walk on the paranoid side of careful. “I know. Forewarned is forearmed, Mum.”
“Really Zoë. You’ll have to choose between two roads.”
I sighed. This card reading had turned out to be a real downer. My earlier bouncy mood had dissolved into glumness. I caught a glimpse of myself in the hall mirror. Dowdy and a bit podgy. I pulled in my stomach and fluffed up my hair. It didn’t make much difference.
I brooded about her predictions and the possible interpretations while I cooked the dinner. I always mean to write them down so I don’t forget the details, to help me make whatever decisions came my way. I have always been bad at making decisions on my own, usually dithering so long that all but one option has expired.
I whizzed up a quick bowl of pasta with a handful of soft, special offer tomatoes. Sarah emerged from her herbal bath. She made a salad with dressing that smelt almost exactly like her shampoo, I opened a bottle of red, retrieved the remote control and we were primed and ready for our weekly, half-hour dose of Larry.
We assumed our customary positions on the sofa, plates balanced on our knees, wine glasses in hand, salad jammed between two cushions and turned on the TV. The starting strains of the jazzy saxophone introduction to ‘Flash Gardens’ were the signal to tuck in.
Larry was wearing his trademark, hand-knitted jumper, sky blue this time. He was holding the hand of an old lady in a wheelchair. All over the city, all over the country, women melted into puddles of hormonal goo. Larry described how he was going to transform her dilapidated garden, in his usual speedy way, to a haven of flowers and shrubs. The lady was a retired entomologist, specialising in butterflies. The camera showed the long hall in her house lined with glass cases full of them, pins through their bodies like insect voodoo dolls. Some were as small as a fingernail, some as large as lettuce leaves. I picked at my salad. They were a bit hairy and too insect-like for my taste.
“Did you wash the leaves?” I asked Sarah, memories of biting an earwig in half when I was twelve flooding back. I had gone off salad for years.
“I did, of course.” She pointed at the TV. “Shush. He’s doing the plants now.”
Larry’s selection of plants was designed to attract butterflies and birds to the lady’s garden.
“No more catching and killing them,” he said. “Just admire them and let them go free.”
The elderly butterfly-killer simpered and pinked under the full heat of his gaze. He started talking about compost, a favourite subject of his and also now of half the country. I ate some more pasta. Just as he was ripping open a large bag of the stuff and plunging his hands inside to check the consistency, the phone rang. I looked at Sarah but she was scrabbling around on the floor after a loose cherry tomato. The call was definitely for her. The phone had been ringing like a teenager’s mobile since she and Jack set the date a year ago. At this stage, I was immune to fielding calls about the endless wedding arrangements and a little fed up. If it wasn’t the caterers calling, it would be the bloody band.
I put my plate on the floor and went over to the phone. I swallowed my mouthful of pasta and stabbed the on button.
“Hello,” I said with a venom-stained voice.
“Hi,” said a transatlantic-accented voice. “This is Carrie Anotoli, Larry Harte’s personal aide calling for Zoë Madison.”
Larry Harte’s aide? “Yeah, right,” I said. Sarah was often pulling elaborate practical jokes, but this one was not one of her best. “Thanks Sarah. And I’m the pope’s girlfriend.” I hung up.
“Thanks for what?” said Sarah, turning round from the sofa.
“You weren’t just on the phone to me?”
“Me? No. Shush. He’s talking.” She turned back to the TV.
I looked down. Sarah’s new all-singing, all-dancing mobile, pink and barely larger than a credit card was charging beside the phone book. It couldn’t have been Sarah calling me. What had I done? Who had I hung up on? I pressed the Caller Display button. It showed a Dublin number I didn’t recognise. I started to breathe a bit too fast. Who had she said it was? Carol someone? Kerry?
The phone rang again as I was close to hyper-ventilating. It was the same Dublin number. I nearly dropped the phone in my hurry to press the connect button.
“Hello, hello?”
“Hello, can you hear me?” The voice was faraway.
“Hello?” I said again. Something was wrong. I looked at the phone. It was upside down. I turned it the right way up. “Hello?” I said for the fourth time. “This is Zoë Madison. Who is this?”
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